I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Kia ora Hi my name is Payton
We have a visit from Fanimals and there was a dog and the name is Moleson we have a photo with the Fanimals people and here is the photo here you go
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Hi Payton! Riley here this good i love how you have a picture of the dog really cute! anyway you bought we back to when they came! i think you could add more writing to explain more of what happened! anyway i have to go now payton bye! have a good day
Hi Payton, Soheilla here, I admire you pictures! This gave me a memory when i had a dream of Mulsin being my pet! but how did you get the pictures? anyway, that's all i could say. bye!
Hello Payton its Chevelle here. I liked that you put pictures in the blog post. Did you think about putting one more picture in. Maybe next time you could put one more picture in.
Hey Payton. Kaycee here I like that you got a photo with them molson was really fluffy and cute.Maybe next time you could write a bit more writing so thwn you can tell people what they came in for Well Ill blog you later.
Kia Ora It Is Hakeem Here And I Have Never Really Seen FANIMALS But I Think It Is AWESOME! Maybe Next Time You Could Make A Blog Post About WHAT NOW. BLOG YA LATER! BYE!
Kia ora it's Nikau.That's awesome that you got to take a photo with Jess and Molson you guys are lucky.Did you know that we didn't get to take a photo as a class with them.This takes me back to when fanimals came to our school.
hey payton its connor i really like this class photo of you it was really sad because i was not there but it seemed like lots of fun maybe next time you could write hy they came in .ill blog you later
Hi Payton it's Raewyn. I enjoyed the part when you put photos of your class and jess also the cute dog. This reminded me of when we met Jess and all the student get to pet the dog name Molson. There is nothing wrong with this blog post and that look Awesome good job :)
Kia ora Bea here in the yellow zone! I really like that you put lot's of picture of Jess and maybe next time you could do a facts about Fanimals and i really like it too! blog you later!
Hi Payton, It's Phoebe speaking. This is amazing because I really like this class photo of Fanimals because it's cool! I really like te photo, it's cool, bye!! Blog you later!
Hi Payton, I do remember that visit. But I think you need to work on the paragraphs you put in your blog, try making it more interesting except for making it short and less grammar. Maybe decorate it to make it more to stand out.
Kia ora Payton, Good job on this post, I like the photos that you have inserted into the post! Next time you could check your grammar and where you put fullstops and commas. That's all from me, bye.
Kia Ora Payton, This is a great example of what happened when they visited. Next time check your grammar because there is spaces where there should be different punctuation. But great job!
Kia ora payton it Ethan H from gilberthorpe school, I like your fanimals post and the pictures are cool too. Maybe next time add some more infomaion to the fanimals post. Thats all I have to say.Bye.
Talofa Payton, Acasia here I really like how you laid out your post. I think you have done great on this post because you have added in so much information. Maybe next time you could have added in a question or a next step but over all this is good!
Kia Ora Payton. I like your blog post about Fanimals coming in it was so cool pat Molson and get a card signed by Jess. Whakamanawa was so lucky to get extra time with Molson and get a few photos with them. Do you like Fanimals?
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Kia ora Payton. Savanah speaking. Your post on the Fanimals visit looks great!
ReplyDeleteHi Payton. Savanah here Again. Mabye you could think about adding some things that happened at the Fanimals visit and I like the pictures.
ReplyDeleteHi Payton! Riley here
ReplyDeletethis good i love how you have a picture of the dog really cute! anyway
you bought we back to when they came!
i think you could add more writing to explain more of what happened!
anyway i have to go now payton bye! have a good day
Hi Payton, Soheilla here, I admire you pictures! This gave me a memory when i had a dream of Mulsin being my pet! but how did you get the pictures? anyway, that's all i could say. bye!
ReplyDeleteHello Payton its Chevelle here. I liked that you put pictures in the blog post. Did you think about putting one more picture in. Maybe next time you could put one more picture in.
ReplyDeleteHey Payton. Kaycee here
ReplyDeleteI like that you got a photo with them molson was really fluffy and cute.Maybe next time you could write a bit more writing so thwn you can tell people what they came in for
Well Ill blog you later.
Hi payton. the fanamails visit was really fun my fav bit was when we got to pat the dog
ReplyDeleteHi payton its Ashton i love fanimals next time you should not put your last name in a blog post.
ReplyDeletehi it is lexi here you are good at pating bogs.
ReplyDeleteKia Ora It Is Hakeem Here And I Have Never Really Seen FANIMALS But I Think It Is AWESOME! Maybe Next Time You Could Make A Blog Post About WHAT NOW. BLOG YA LATER! BYE!
ReplyDeleteHi payton its micah i like your fanimals visit it was cool and fun but see you later bye
ReplyDeleteKia ora Payton,
ReplyDeleteI'm Basty and I like your work I don't know why they visited us maybe surprise? bye
Kia ora it's Nikau.That's awesome that you got to take a photo with Jess and Molson you guys are lucky.Did you know that we didn't get to take a photo as a class with them.This takes me back to when fanimals came to our school.
ReplyDeleteHi payton Its sapphire its was very cool that the fanimals came i like your post Bye
ReplyDeletehey payton its connor
ReplyDeletei really like this class photo of you it was really sad because i was not there but it seemed like lots of fun maybe next time you could write hy they came in .ill blog you later
Hi Payton it's Raewyn. I enjoyed the part when you put photos of your class and jess also the cute dog. This reminded me of when we met Jess and all the student get to pet the dog name Molson. There is nothing wrong with this blog post and that look Awesome good job :)
ReplyDeleteKia ora Bea here in the yellow zone!
ReplyDeleteI really like that you put lot's of picture of Jess and maybe next time you could do a facts about Fanimals and i really like it too!
blog you later!
Hi payton Addison here I like this BLog post really eye catching I think this is the best blog keep up the good work
ReplyDeleteAddison
Hello Payton its me Wiari your so lucky because you to have a photo with jess.
ReplyDeleteWhat was your best part when fanimals came.
Hi Payton, It's Phoebe speaking. This is amazing because I really like this class photo of Fanimals because it's cool! I really like te photo, it's cool, bye!! Blog you later!
ReplyDeleteKia ora Payton.
ReplyDeleteI liked that you put photos of what happened when Fanimals visited. Maybe you could put more writing about the Fanimals assemnly.
Hi Payton, I do remember that visit. But I think you need to work on the paragraphs you put in your blog, try making it more interesting except for making it short and less grammar. Maybe decorate it to make it more to stand out.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Payton,
ReplyDeleteGood job on this post, I like the photos that you have inserted into the post! Next time you could check your grammar and where you put fullstops and commas. That's all from me, bye.
Kia Ora Payton,
ReplyDeleteThis is a great example of what happened when they visited. Next time check your grammar because there is spaces where there should be different punctuation. But great job!
Kia ora payton it Ethan H from gilberthorpe school,
ReplyDeleteI like your fanimals post and the pictures are cool too. Maybe next time add some more infomaion to the fanimals post. Thats all I have to say.Bye.
Talofa Payton, Acasia here
ReplyDeleteI really like how you laid out your post. I think you have done great on this post because you have added in so much information. Maybe next time you could have added in a question or a next step but over all this is good!
Kia Ora Payton.
ReplyDeleteI like your blog post about Fanimals coming in it was so cool pat Molson and get a card signed by Jess. Whakamanawa was so lucky to get extra time with Molson and get a few photos with them. Do you like Fanimals?
Blog you later.