I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi Payton it's Dani I like you animation. Just next time could you add text explain why it's hard or whats the easy bit. But amazing job you should be so proud of your self Payton see you next time bye.
Hi Payton it's Chrysler here I like your slide it is really cool I like how you added that big creeper how did he kill it it blows up if you get to close to it just something to think about maybe next time you can make one about learning by.
Hi Payton, Kaunteya here. I like your animation that you did,I can't wait for part two to come out! But how did one person kill all of those zombies and that huge creeper! Maybe you could make it that you make it someone got hurt? or fell over? Oh! also when you killed that creeper shouldn't it of exploded up? Great job Payton. Bye!!!
greetings payton it isaiah i just saw your animation it's pretty cool but every time you end a animation you end it with a happy ending because when you ended it was just a plain building when the rockets left it just the building so remember to add more slides cause i really was excited to see some more but that was the end so i hope you add more slides next time you make and animation bye
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That was amazing please\ please please make part 2 and add green Steve in it
ReplyDeletehello i'm Ivan and i like your minecraft animation my favourite part is the fihgting guy that was fighting the zombie
ReplyDeletethat was a good slide but i have a question when are you gonna create part 2 i hope its gonna be good
ReplyDeletethis is the best work for me out of all the others
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ReplyDeleteHi Payton it's Dani I like you animation. Just next time could you add text explain why it's hard or whats the easy bit. But amazing job you should be so proud of your self Payton see you next time bye.
ReplyDeleteyour animashin is amsing! but you can add more slides for the text box's.
ReplyDeleteHi Payton it's Chrysler here I like your slide it is really cool I like how you added that big creeper how did he kill it it blows up if you get to close to it just something to think about maybe next time you can make one about learning by.
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ReplyDeleteHi Payton, Kaunteya here. I like your animation that you did,I can't wait for part two to come out! But how did one person kill all of those zombies and that huge creeper! Maybe you could make it that you make it someone got hurt? or fell over? Oh! also when you killed that creeper shouldn't it of exploded up? Great job Payton. Bye!!!
Hello payton I like how long it was but you should contunue it plx bye im ya name noah
ReplyDeletegreetings payton it isaiah i just saw your animation it's pretty cool but every time you end a animation you end it with a happy ending because when you ended it was just a plain building when the rockets left it just the building so remember to add more slides cause i really was excited to see some more but that was the end so i hope you add more slides next time you make and animation bye
ReplyDeleteWow the supence is killing me what will happen 😮😮
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