I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi Payton, I'm Ms Raisin from Te Ropu Manawaroa. I admire that you have posted on your blog so that there are things for people to comment on while your are a blogger of the week. Did you think about explaining what they are about? What learning are they about? To improve, you could include some text in your post.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
Hi Payton, I'm Ms Raisin from Te Ropu Manawaroa. I admire that you have posted on your blog so that there are things for people to comment on while your are a blogger of the week. Did you think about explaining what they are about? What learning are they about? To improve, you could include some text in your post.
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