I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Kia ora Payton I was very impressed when i first glanced at this post. Well done for getting it completed in time. I see you copied the text from my example, which looks great, however you would need to be writing your own reflection and introduction as sometimes copying won't be relevant.
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Kia ora Payton
ReplyDeleteI was very impressed when i first glanced at this post. Well done for getting it completed in time. I see you copied the text from my example, which looks great, however you would need to be writing your own reflection and introduction as sometimes copying won't be relevant.