I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Kia ora Payton I love the way you put the picture on every slide so it will make it cool. you brought me back to when I my mum were watching a movie and this big big big earthquake hit us it was so big we were scared. next time you could put some more words/facts on it to make it cooler. Hey are you ready for a question okay what is the worst earthquake you had and where and when and all of the rest of the ws okay bye.
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Kia ora Payton I love the way you put the picture on every slide so it will make it cool. you brought me back to when I my mum were watching a movie and this big big big earthquake hit us it was so big we were scared. next time you could put some more words/facts on it to make it cooler. Hey are you ready for a question okay what is the worst earthquake you had and where and when and all of the rest of the ws okay bye.
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