The Fire on the Hills
The fire went near my cousin’s house and they surprised me and my mum by coming over. Woah! We saw the humongous red fire on the news. We played lots of games to distract ourselves from the blazing fire. My cousin went home when the fire went out. I was scared because they weren’t going to be evacuated again.
i Love your work on the fire
ReplyDeleteI just loved your presentation of this story. You use some real good wow words also to make this story stick out. I am sure more people should read this and they would be impressed.
ReplyDeleteGreat story Payton. I like the red writing and black background, it goes nicely with the fire theme! You could describe what the fire looked like. Could you smell the smoke from where you lived? - Miss Johnstone
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